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 After coming out as Sparked to her grandmother, Zelda, Amanda was never treated by her as something to be ashamed of; with her, in this small, carved out space of warmth and acceptance, Amanda finally received the support she desperately yearned for. But, all good things must come to an end, and Zelda’s passing hit Amanda hard. Remembering Zelda’s advice, and finally meeting another Spark to open up to, Amanda took the plunge and began attending Zuri’s Spark group.
-But because no one can identify her as a Spark, and her spark is on the powerful side, the few Sparks at Zuri's group often grill her as to whether she //really// faces any form of discrimination or downside -- and whether her ability to remain forever closeted means she experiences a form of privilege they've not been granted.
+Nothing could have prepared Amanda for the other Sparks to reject her too: because no one can identify her as a Spark, and her spark is on the powerful side, the few Sparks at Zuri's group grilled her as to whether she //really// faces any form of discrimination or downside -- and whether her ability to remain forever closeted means she experiences a form of privilege they've not been granted.
-Nothing could have prepared Amanda for the other Sparks to reject her too. Soon, her attendance began to drop, before she stopped going to the meetings entirely. Feeling painfully alone, Amanda began pouring through her memories, reflecting on the past -- //wishing// she could only have Zelda’s wisdom once more.
+Soon, her attendance began to drop, before she stopped going to the meetings entirely. Feeling painfully alone, Amanda began pouring through her memories, reflecting on the past -- //wishing// she could only have Zelda’s wisdom once more.
 Wait a second… //if only she could have Zelda’s wisdom once more.//

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