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 ====== Greenfield Meadows ======
-{{:suburbia.jpg?200  |Greenfield Meadows}}
+{{:suburbia.jpg?226  |Greenfield Meadows}}
-//Panning over rows and rows of neat houses and gardens, the sun glints off shiny windows and cars below the sweeping helicopter shot as a cheery voiceover invites you to move out of city centre and into the suburbs. ‘A place for communities. A place for families. A place to build a future. Move to Greenfield Meadows today.’//
+//Panning over rows and rows of neat houses and gardens, the sun glints off shiny windows and cars below the sweeping helicopter shot as a cheery voiceover invites you to move out of city centre and into the suburbs.//
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+//"A place for communities. A place for families. A place to build a future. Move to Greenfield Meadows today."//
 =====Locations=====
-{{ :park.jpg?200|Levitt Park}}
+{{ :park.jpg?190|Levitt Park}}
 **Levitt Park**
-Operating as something of a central point for Greenfield Meadows, the large Levitt Park contains everything a community could need; a playground, with sections for both younger and older children, dog walking facilities, a community vegetable patch, and of course large green areas for locals to play sports, have picnics, or just generally hang out.
+Operating as something of a central point for Greenfield Meadows, the large Levitt Park contains everything a community could need: a playground, with sections for both younger and older children; dog walking facilities; a community vegetable patch; and, of course, large green areas for locals to play sports, have picnics, or just generally hang out.
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-{{:tea_shop.jpg?200 |Blends (with Benefits)}}
+{{:tea_shop.jpg?200 |Déjà Brew}}
-**Blends (with Benefits)**
+**Déjà Brew**\\
+//"The brew-ty is in the eye of the tea holder."//
-‘The brew-ty is in the eye of the tea holder’. Popular due to both the excellent beverages and the close proximity to Levitt Park, Blends is the go-to place for kids in the suburbs looking for a fun place to hang out, if they can bear the down//pour// of puns. Plus, every month, they donate a percentage of their profits to a charity voted on by the customers!
+Popular due to both the excellent beverages and its close proximity to Levitt Park, Déjà Brew is the go-to place for kids in the suburbs looking for a fun place to hang out, if they can bear the down//pour// of puns. Plus, every month, they donate a percentage of their profits to a charity voted on by the customers!
-{{ :suburbs.jpg?200|Houses}}
+{{ :suburbs.jpg?230|Houses}}
 **Houses**
 The bulk of Greenfield Meadows is made up of cul-de-sac after cul-de-sac of residential homes. Most of the homes are strikingly similar, each having reasonably sized gardens in both the front and the back, and enough space inside to comfortably house a growing family. Smaller houses exist for those individuals or couples who commute in and out of Citropolis.
-{{:high_school.jpg?200 |Citropolis High}}
+{{:high_school.jpg?160 |Citropolis High}}
 **Citropolis High**
-Built to accommodate the older children of the growing suburban population, [[Citropolis High]] is your typical high school, within easy walking access from the entirety of Greenfield Meadows.
+Constructed to accommodate the older children of the growing suburban population, [[Citropolis High]] is your typical high school, within easy walking access from the entirety of Greenfield Meadows.
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-{{ :monorail_suburbs.png?200|Greenfield Monorail Station}}
+{{ :monorail_suburbs.png?210|Greenfield Monorail Station}}
 **Greenfield Monorail Station**
-Built for the many people who commute between Greenfield Meadows and the business sector of Citropolis, the new monorail station saves an enormous amount of time for many of the people in Greenfield Meadows.
+Built for the many people who commute between Greenfield Meadows and the business sector of Citropolis, the new monorail station saves an enormous amount of time for many people in Greenfield Meadows.
 ===== Notable Characters =====
-**Penelope Hicks (she/her):** The manager of Blends (with Benefits), Penelope is popular with her customers due to her cheery nature and the delicious food and beverages she lovingly prepares. When she took over management, she started the charity fund tradition at the café.
+**Penelope Hicks (she/her):** The manager of Déjà Brew. Penelope is popular with her customers due to her cheery nature -- and the delicious food and beverages she lovingly prepares. When she took over management, she started the charity fund tradition at the café.
-**Aster Sinensis (they/them):** One of the servers at Blends, Aster might seem a bit reserved and definitely prefers to stay behind the counter, but they're always ready to make a delicious cup of tea!
+**Aster Sinensis (they/them):** One of the servers at Déjà Brew. Aster might seem a bit reserved (and definitely prefers to stay behind the counter), but they're always ready to make a delicious cup of tea!

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